I believe what you posted was very reasonable. But consider this what if you composed a catchier title? I mean I don't want to tell you how to run your website but suppose you added a post title that makes people want more? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is kinda plain. You ought to peek at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create article titles to get viewers to click. You might add a video or a pic or two to get readers excited about everything've got to say. In my opinion it could make your blog a little livelier.
